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Old 06-01-2009, 02:48 PM   #1
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ok

version 2

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Old 06-01-2009, 08:54 PM   #2
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TONS better... the spacing looks loads neater and less cramped.
The Apple style icons are done nicely too - who did them?

Needs a logo...

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Old 06-02-2009, 06:14 AM   #3
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I'm not sure I'd have the 'more' links on the left hand side. Your sending people to two very 'distracting' websites (I know, I've spent hours on both) Keep them on your page and registering
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Old 06-02-2009, 06:49 AM   #4
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i would add free to your meta name-description it will be seen in search engines
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Old 06-02-2009, 01:57 PM   #5
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Looks good, though I do have a constructive comment.

(might be just me )
I had some difficulty in reading it. How about increasing the line height and or letter spacing to the paragraphs making it easier to read.
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