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Soad
09-19-2010, 05:50 AM
Please check out my site www.bodyelite.co.uk your comments most appreciated

Thank You

Corrosive
09-19-2010, 07:35 AM
It is a little plain for my tastes. I think some more images would help massively. Also you have this for one of your links;

<a href="prices.html">Prices |</a>

Whereas the others have the | outside the anchor tag so the prices link is the only one where the | changes colour after visiting. Try making it...

<a href="prices.html">Prices </a>|

You are also still using tables for some parts of your layout. That's a habit to break if you can.

d a v e
09-19-2010, 07:58 AM
quite a nice logo but it's completely lost against that background!

white text black background - too harsh and black backgrounds are a bit dated in some circumstances, try a white background with charcoal text

needs some headings and an image

you shouldn't use tables for layout

text is littered with empty <p>s and <br>s: use csss to control the spaces between paragraphs (and that's a heck of a lot of white space you have between paragraphs). needs more line-height in the text

daniel image is poorly cut out - jagged edges and white highlights in the hair

blockquotes (i.e. testimonials) should be marked up as <blockquote>. quotes as <q>

no favicon

move all the css to an external stylesheet

arial sucks as a web font - try verdana instead

don't underline text that isn't a link, and mark up headings as headings (h1,h2, etc)

Soad
09-19-2010, 08:04 AM
Thanks for your comments guys I will work on it