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10-11-2009, 10:36 AM
Hello everybody,
please can you cast your eyes over the following website and let me know what you think?


Best regards

d a v e
10-11-2009, 11:31 AM
looks clean and good, though it's a little left-aligned for my liking.

why are you using only headings for all your main copy?! this means you have to insert soft breaks (<br />
<br />
) to produce the appearance of paragrraphs.
also it's usual to only have one h1 per page according to hierarchy, er a bit like in a magazine or newspaper say ;)

missing a couple of apostrophes:

"The Carrier Pigeon is The Ribble Valley's

why only a transitional doctype? not sure what you're using that wouldn't allow room for strict ;)

your email address is going to get spammed to crap: at least use something like this http://www.seowebsitepromotion.com/obfuscate_email.asp

overall a good job, at least it looks better than the magazine!
newest community monthly magazine."

We'll be circulating 12,000, A5, Full Colour Glossy FREE magazines to people's doors.

10-11-2009, 11:59 PM
Having all your copy inside the H1 tag is a mistake, you need to end the header tag after your header, not after your content.

10-13-2009, 07:14 AM
thanks for your input, i'll sort it asap