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davidj
02-16-2009, 08:18 PM
check it out

give it to me on the chin

shout-out to corrosive for the inspiration (respect mate)

http://nirvanadesign.co.uk/Test/codezenith.jpg

Rob_Che
02-16-2009, 09:10 PM
Are we critiquing the design?

OK... I like it, it really reminds me of mediatemple.com which is a good thing, I love the warm dark colours. You have some nice warm greys in there...

What's the idea with the condensation? It would look nice to have the CodeZenith filtered over the blue background . . . Do you have a logo? Do you want one? Mail me. I like logos.

If we're not evaluatin the design... I dunno!>?

Corrosive
02-16-2009, 10:57 PM
check it out

give it to me on the chin

shout-out to corrosive for the inspiration (respect mate)

http://nirvanadesign.co.uk/Test/codezenith.jpg

Mine was far prettier.

domedia
02-16-2009, 11:11 PM
You want critique?? It looks like a *** **** *** **** *****! Sorry the evil dictator on these forums censored that ;-)

General design and colors: great!
Elements included and the whole 1-2-3 approach: Very very nice
Maybe just make something above 1-2-3 not so tall so it moves just a tad up the page?

edbr
02-17-2009, 01:34 AM
purrty as a $5 warmonger. top 'banner" maybe little less height or add a logo as rob offered

davidj
02-17-2009, 06:49 AM
Are we critiquing the design?
You have some nice warm greys in there...


f*Łkin artist!

Rob_Che
02-17-2009, 12:16 PM
f*Łkin artist!

You NEED us...

coloeagle
02-17-2009, 04:33 PM
Personally not a big fan of white on black :( - but in general looks good.

The top section could be a little shorter or possibly combine it with the dew image.
(Of course now remember when it comes to designing, I have trouble with stick figures)

Rob_Che
02-17-2009, 05:45 PM
I would prefer the top section shorter too- with thelogo overlaying the 'dew'...

Reminds me of a trip to Amshterdam... darkened room, condensation on the windows... (Sorry DoMedia ! :) )

davidj
02-17-2009, 06:03 PM
maybe the site deserves a rotation banner

in order to give it a different feel each time